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    Song?

    Hi guys I wrote a song a wee while ago and im looking for some crit?

    The song is called Red Ribbon it was recorded in take to the levels are all over the place and the guitar, bass and vocals are also all over the place however what do you think of the song itself ignore all the little things like as i say the recording etc?


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    pah bebo blocked at work.....

    although I can suggest that it's a bit surreal - and it will go down a storm when you make it to T in the Park 2008 !!!

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    I know your not after comments on the levels, but they made it hard to hear the lyrics, which in turn makes it hard to comment on the song itslef.

    Apart from that, Is this somthing were likly to hear on a road safty ad soon? Nice work tho mate
    Yet another p0100 and p0110, fault code sufferer with the X18XE1

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    we have a good few songs written ready to go into the studio soon to make a demo which hopefully we can enter into t break , even though t break is a who you know secret handshake effort Yes its rigged. but i know some peeps in the know


    oh and cheers for the comments so far
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    Can anyone please listen to B-side and crit it please?

    http://www.bebo.com/MusicSongs.jsp?MemberId=2553558879
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